From ca1b20f88fc8d376dd5be3a94c84c48a9c9cf3fe Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: David Robillard <d@drobilla.net>
Date: Sun, 29 Mar 2020 13:11:10 +0200
Subject: Improve main page text slightly

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 content/pages/index.md | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

(limited to 'content/pages')

diff --git a/content/pages/index.md b/content/pages/index.md
index 23a28da..e3ad390 100644
--- a/content/pages/index.md
+++ b/content/pages/index.md
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 Title:
 save_as: index.html
 
-LV2 is an open extensible standard for audio plugins.
+LV2 is an extensible open standard for audio plugins.
 LV2 has a simple core interface,
 which is accompanied by extensions that add more advanced functionality.
 
@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ Extensions support more powerful features, such as:
 
  * Platform-native UIs
  * Network-transparent plugin control
- * Portable/archivable persistent state
- * Threaded tasks (like file loading) with sample-accurate export
- * Deep semantic plugin discovery and control with meaningful units
+ * Portable and archivable persistent state
+ * Non-realtime tasks (like file loading) with sample-accurate export
+ * Semantic control with meaningful control designations and value units
 
 The LV2 specification itself as well as the accompanying libraries are permissively licensed free software, with support for all major platforms.
 
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